which got posted up on the Independent Comics Site. I'd love it if ya'll wouldn't mind checking it out and commenting, here or there. Wherever. It's not great, and reading it I can see errors I should have caught before posting, but it was my first article and I was nervous. Apologies for the rather frantic way in which it was written.

Mmh, IMO you say too much of the story. Well, if I had to read Blame! again without knowing it already, I really wouldn't want to have even a tiny idea of what the megastructure is.
I once made an article, and I guess what I said is that it takes place in a degenerate, apparently endless city, that feels almost a character on its own. But not much more. I try to give an idea of the mood, of how Nihei doesn't give much informations and all, but I would really not say that it's a dyson sphere past mars, etc etc...

Except that, good article, the beginning feels a bit fan-boy-ish, but the rest of the article explains well how one can be so passionate about Blame! .