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hydrophoenix
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 Posted: Wed Dec 20, 2006 11:32 pm |
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| HumanPosts: 8Location: North LondonJoined: Sat Dec 16, 2006 1:59 am
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Early version of a pic i'm working on slowly inbetween other things, thought i'd post it how it is to perhaps get some good crits, noticed there are some pro's lurking around these parts, so any crits would be vastly appreciated. The background's mostly a placeholder, i hope your eyes don't bleed too much from having to look at it. :>
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ZombiToaster
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| Posted: Thu Dec 21, 2006 6:01 am |
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| Advanced SafeguardPosts: 217Location: SwedenJoined: Wed Jun 07, 2006 7:34 pm
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i really like the work on the clothes.
personaly not a fan of spiky hair.
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ShakKen
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| Posted: Thu Dec 21, 2006 7:19 am |
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| Electronic KnightPosts: 380Location: MalaysiaJoined: Mon Oct 17, 2005 4:21 pm
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The position of her arms looks real awkward. If you're going for a 'snapshot' piccy with energy and motion there should be a lot more splashing in the water. Aside from that it looks pretty cool.
Some more narrative elements to tell us more about the world, character and scene would not be amiss either.
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hydrophoenix
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| Posted: Thu Dec 21, 2006 2:03 pm |
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ShakKen
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| Posted: Fri Dec 22, 2006 2:10 am |
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hydrophoenix
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| Posted: Fri Dec 22, 2006 2:14 am |
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ShakKen
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| Posted: Fri Dec 22, 2006 2:28 am |
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hydrophoenix
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| Posted: Fri Dec 22, 2006 2:36 am |
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ShakKen
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| Posted: Fri Dec 22, 2006 5:16 am |
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