Did this couple of hours ago. Hope you fellow Nihei-sensei fans like it!

Very Cool.

Apart from some of Killy, it looks quite professional. It definitely looks like something from one of the first four volumes.

Keep up the good work.

Second page of the Blame! doujin I'm doing for fun.

This is so awesome!

But can I give you some hints? Because I have done some Killy artwork myself but I lack a scanner...

Only two things:

1.) You'll need to do some shading around the shot produced by the GBE. This darkens the atmosphere respectively with the distance around it, drawing more attention to it and making it more dramatic and easier to see.

2.) Keep in mind that the GBE produces lengthy beams.


This is still awesome, though!


Do you read this right-to-left or left-to-right?

Y'know, I'm gonna be honest and say that I thought this was just some old Nihei image you found, ripped, and called your own. But looking at the second picture, it doesn't quite look like something Nihei has done. You did this yourself? I'm pretty damn impressed.

wow. can't wait to see how this pans out.

oh, and what's the dialouge in the second page?

whoa!
not bad. Not bad at all!

Excellent!

The last two pages, especially. They look like authentic manga!

Excellent! you should add the dialogue and sound effects to page 2 and this will be just awesome...